Friday, March 18, 2016


On Wednesday’s class, we all got in a circle and shared with each other what we wrote about on our 2nd short essay, which was about a female musician. It was really cool listening to everyone’s opinion and how they feel about the female singers they wrote about. The female I chose to write about was Beyoncé. What I mentioned in my essay was that Beyoncé has been a hard worker since she was a young, which is why she is where she is today and so successful. I also mentioned how she is a risk taker. Beyoncé took a risk releasing the formation song when she most likely knew the outcome and how people would react but it did not stop her. All that really mattered to her was that she was being herself and not afraid of where she comes from. She is also very confident, which many people who aren’t confident in themselves can look up to her. Lastly, I mention how Beyoncé has a really positive personality all around. Many people say negative things about her daughter Blue, however Beyoncé has never replied publicly to any of the disrespectful comments. I find Beyoncé inspiring for her hard work, which makes me work hard to reach my goals.

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  1. Melanie, i liked how you decided to write about Beyonce because besides being a talented artist, as you mentioned she is definitely a risk taker. She is one of the few artists that stay away from drama and completely ignore the bad criticisms and keeps being a diva. Beyonce definitely does not need all that negativity in order to be famous.

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  2. I agree with your opinion on how Beyoncé is a confident woman who isn't afraid to take risks. I think its great that she is able to ignore all the negative comments that people may say about her and isn't afraid speak out. I find it a little sad how people say negative things to her young daughter Blue but I admire Beyoncé for keeping to herself and ignoring these awful comments when many other people would cause a seen.

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